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高考英语作文评分标准 阅卷评分五个档次的高分模板

2023-01-06 19:57

全国卷高考英语作文被划分为五个档次。阅卷标准如下:

全国卷高考英语作文评分标准

1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

第五档(很好):(21-25分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

(1)覆盖所有内容要点

(2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,

(3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,

(4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的

第四档(好):(16-20分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

(1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容

(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

(3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致

(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的

第三档(适当):(11-15分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务

(1)虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容

(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解

(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的

第二档(较差):(6-10分)

未恰当完成试题规定的任务

(1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容

(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解

(4)较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性信息未能清楚地传达给读者

第一档(差):(1-5分)

未完成试题规定的任务

(1)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求

(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

(3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解

(4)缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者。

根据上面的评分标准,有以下几点需要注意

1英语作文第一印象很重要,阅卷老师在短暂的判卷过程中,需要迅速判断文章的档次。整洁的卷面将会为考生争取更多的“印象分”。所以考生在注重英语作文语句通顺、语法正确的条件下,仍需注意字迹清晰这一要求。

2如果最后几天,字迹实在改变不了,可以在考场上多提醒自己,字迹不求写得多好看,但是一定要容易辨认,同时建议字写得不要太小或太拥挤,否则不利于电脑阅卷。

3字数问题。切记字数不要过多或过少,字数刚好为宜,字数太多或太少都会成为扣分的因素。

超级实用的英语作文模板

段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

there areifferent opinions among people as to____.some people suggest that____.

2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

there is an old saying____.it’s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

today,____, which h***ebrought a lot of harms in ouraily life.first, ____.second,____.what makes things worse is that____.

4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

nowadays,it is common to____.many people like ____because____.besides,____.

5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

everything has two sides and____is not an exception,it has both advantages andisadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… 

people’s opinions about____vary from person to person.some people say that____.to them,____.

7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

man is now facing a big problem____which is becoming more and more serious.

8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。

____has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heatedebates are right on their way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

____has been playing an increasingly important role in ouray-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢? according to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that____ while.obviously,____,but why?

中间段落句

1.相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。 

on the contrary,there are some people in f***or of ____ .at the same time,they say____ .

2.但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。

but ion’t think it is a very good way to solve ____ .for example,____.worst of all,___.

3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……

____is necessary and important to ourcountry’sevelopment and construction.first,____.what’s more, ____.most important of all,____.

4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。 there are several measures for us to adopt.first, we can____.

5.面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面,…… 

confronted with____,we should take a series of effective measures to____.for one thing,____for another,____.

6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 

it is high time that something wasone about it.for example,____.in addition.____.all these measures will certainly____.

7.为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于…… 

why____? the firstreason is that____.the second reason is____.the third is____.for allthis, the main cause of ____due to ____.

8.然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。

however, just like everything has both its good and bad sides,____also has its ownisadvantages, such as____.

9.尽管如此,我相信……更有利。

none the less, i believe that____is more advantageous.

10.完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下: 

i fully agree with the statement that____because____. 

结尾句

1.至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… 

as far as i am concerned, i agree with thelatter opinion to some extent.i think that____.

2.总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。

in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ____.only in this way can ____in the future.

3.但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)…… 

but ____and ____h***e their own advantages.for example, _____, while_____.comparing this with that, however, i pfer to______.

4.就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

personally, i believe that____.consequently, i’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5.随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。

with theevelopment of society, ____.so it’s urgent and necessary to ____.if every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6.至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能…… 

for my part, i think itreasonable to_____.only in this way can you _____.

7.对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……;第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是…… 

in my opinion, i think it necessary to____.the reasons are as follows.first ____.second ____.last but not least,____.

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。

it isifficult to say whether ____is good or not in general as itepends very much on the situation of______.however, from a personal point of view find ______.

9.综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论…… from what has beeniscussed above, we mayreasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……

if we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we shouldo is_____.

书信的常见写作模板

开头部分:

1.let me tell you something about the activity.

2.i’m glad to h***e received your letter of apr.9th.i’m pleased to hear that you’re comingto china for a visit.

3.i’m writing to thank you for your helpuring my stay in america.

4.and i would like to write a letter to tell you that…

结尾部分:

1.bestwishes.

2.i’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

3.i’d appciate it if you could reply earlier.

口头通知常见写作模板

开场白部分:

ladies and gentlemen, may i h***e your attention, please? i h***e an announcement tomake.

正文部分:

all the teachers and students are required to attend it.please take your notebooks and make notes.please listen carefully and we’ll h***e aiscussion in groups.please come on time andon’t be late.

结束语部分:

please come and join in it.everybody is welcome to attend it.i hope you’ll h***e a nice time here.that’s all.thank you.

议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段recently we’ve had aiscussion about whether we should...(导入话题) our opinions are pided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

正文部分:

第2段most of the students are in f***or of it.(正方观点) here are the reasons.first...second...finally...(列出2~3个同意的理由)

第3段however, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点) their reasons are as follows.in the firstplace...what’s more...in addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论部分:

第4段personally speaking, the advantages overweigh theisadvantages, for it willo us more harm than good, so i support it.(个人观点)

2.“a或者b”类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段some people hold the opinion that a is superior to b in many ways.others, however, argue that b is much better.personally, i would pfer a because i think ahas more advantages.

正文部分:

第2段there are many reasons why i pfer a.themain reason is that ...another reason is that...(同意a的原因)

第3段: of course, b also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个b的优势)

结论部分:

第4段: but if all these factors are considered, a is much better than b.from what has beeniscussed above, we may finallyraw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)

3.观点论述类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 as a student, i am strongly in f***our of theecision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)the reasons for this may be listed as follows.(过渡句段承上启下)

正文部分:

第2段firstof all...secondly...besides...(列出2~3个同意或反对的理由)

结论 第3段in conclusion, i believe that...(照应第1段,构成"总?分?总"结构)

4."how to"类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文部分:

第2段 many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.first of all...another way to solve the problem is ...finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论部分:

第3段these are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.but it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

图画类写作模板

开头部分:

look at this picture./the picture shows that.../from this picture, we can see.../as is shown in the picture.../as is seen in the picture...

衔接句部分:

as well as l know, .../as is known to all,.../it is well known that.../in my opinion,.../as far as i am concerned,.../this sight reminds me of something inmyaily life.

结尾句部分:

in conclusion.../in brief.../on the whole.../in short.../in a word.../generally speaking.../ashas been stated..